Dear Lia,
Your blog is very well done. Your new ending is similar to the third book - wait till you get there! You need to use spell check for your spelling so it will improve. Your grammar also could use some improvement (there is also grammar check). You missed one assignment on the list but the ones you did are very good.
Your final grade is 88.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Sunday, May 17, 2009
REFLECTION
I think the assignment was really good becaus it was more fun to do it on the computers instead of writing so much and it was way much easy to do it this way!
And it was worth it becaus we did something and we learned things in other ways from what we use to.
I think I learned alot about my book becaus I had to dig dipper and notice to details
and stuff.....
I think we should keep working this way becaus it was fun and it tuaght us more but in a more cool way...
I think there were some assignments that were really hard!!!
but still it was fun and I liked it!!
And it was worth it becaus we did something and we learned things in other ways from what we use to.
I think I learned alot about my book becaus I had to dig dipper and notice to details
and stuff.....
I think we should keep working this way becaus it was fun and it tuaght us more but in a more cool way...
I think there were some assignments that were really hard!!!
but still it was fun and I liked it!!
=D
Questions
QUESTIONS
- How did Edward became a vampire?
- Why did Bella wanted to become a vampire?
- How did James figuerred out Bella was human?
- Why doesnt Edward have a bed?
- Why Edward doesnt like Jacob?
- How did Edward knew Bella was in danger?
- How did Edwrd knew what the guys wanted to do to Bella?
- What was Charlies job?
- Why did Bella moved to Charlies house?
- How did Bella found out Edward was a vampire?
- Who was Jameses friends?
- What is the game that vampires play?
- Where did James wanted to meet Bella?
- Why didnt Bella want to go to the dance?
- Why was Bella mad at Edward?
ENTER THE BOOK
If I can be in the book I will take so many things!!!
LIST OF THINGS I'LL TAKE TO TWILIGHT:
*I'll take clothes! alot...
*Books...I like reading and there are quite alot boring moments in there...
*A camera! becaus no will beleive me i was there!
*My mom..=]
I DONT know i've never beene in a book!!!!
I cant take there th usual things!!!
sorry...
LIST OF THINGS I'LL TAKE TO TWILIGHT:
*I'll take clothes! alot...
*Books...I like reading and there are quite alot boring moments in there...
*A camera! becaus no will beleive me i was there!
*My mom..=]
I DONT know i've never beene in a book!!!!
I cant take there th usual things!!!
sorry...
Diary
Bella's Diary:
Dear diary, I cant beleive to what hapened latly...!
It was so exciting!
First I moved to this wierd place, wich was hard but Im glad I did this....
Then I met Edward , and everything that hapened with him....it all went pretty fast....
And how I discovered Edward is a vampire! it was un usual but I had a feeling...!
I cant beleine I met real vampires!! I remember I couldnt wait to meet Edwards family!
They are so great!! specially Alice! but Iam kind of worried about Rosalli...I dont think she likes me..anyway Asme and Mr.Cullen are also great! I really liked theme and I think they like me to...but I dont really care..becaus as long as I have Edward Im happy! I love him so much and I want to be with him for the rest of my life!
Oh! and the part with James...I dont like to think about it...it was horible, and so painfull, and I was worried for my mom and Edward and Charlie...but Iam so happy thet we went through it...and everyone is ok...
And now to a better thing! the dance... it was great! even though i thought it is going to be a disasster, it was wonderfull!!!
THATS ALL....
Dear diary, I cant beleive to what hapened latly...!
It was so exciting!
First I moved to this wierd place, wich was hard but Im glad I did this....
Then I met Edward , and everything that hapened with him....it all went pretty fast....
And how I discovered Edward is a vampire! it was un usual but I had a feeling...!
I cant beleine I met real vampires!! I remember I couldnt wait to meet Edwards family!
They are so great!! specially Alice! but Iam kind of worried about Rosalli...I dont think she likes me..anyway Asme and Mr.Cullen are also great! I really liked theme and I think they like me to...but I dont really care..becaus as long as I have Edward Im happy! I love him so much and I want to be with him for the rest of my life!
Oh! and the part with James...I dont like to think about it...it was horible, and so painfull, and I was worried for my mom and Edward and Charlie...but Iam so happy thet we went through it...and everyone is ok...
And now to a better thing! the dance... it was great! even though i thought it is going to be a disasster, it was wonderfull!!!
THATS ALL....
Sunday, May 10, 2009
The ending
When James bit Bella Edward needed to bite her also so he can get the poison out.
But it was to hard for him becaus he didn't want her to become a vampire.
Bella was screaming from pain, she coulnt take it.
But it was to late for Edward, Bella started the procces of becoming a vampire.
It is very hard, and painfull.
And it was hard for everyone to see.
Carlslile and Eward carried her to the car, Rosali , Emmet, Alice and Jasper was runing behind theme.
They got to the house, there was a lot of stress.
Only Carlslile knew what to do.
Edward felt horible, Alice tryed to tell him not to fill bad .
A few days later, Bella felt much better, after all she wanted to be a vampire, but it still felt wierd.
Edward took Bella to the dance, it was great, they danced, they kissed...
And now they live happily ever after!!!
But it was to hard for him becaus he didn't want her to become a vampire.
Bella was screaming from pain, she coulnt take it.
But it was to late for Edward, Bella started the procces of becoming a vampire.
It is very hard, and painfull.
And it was hard for everyone to see.
Carlslile and Eward carried her to the car, Rosali , Emmet, Alice and Jasper was runing behind theme.
They got to the house, there was a lot of stress.
Only Carlslile knew what to do.
Edward felt horible, Alice tryed to tell him not to fill bad .
A few days later, Bella felt much better, after all she wanted to be a vampire, but it still felt wierd.
Edward took Bella to the dance, it was great, they danced, they kissed...
And now they live happily ever after!!!
THE END.
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